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Marcy the Vamp Queen by Jasperideon

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English: First is good very good job with great marci but his legs seem to be crooked and seems to be a little fat, then did buxom fangs and everything else very hatched this very very well
Keep it up and get very far.

español:Primero esta bien genial muy buen trabajo con marci pero sus piernas pareces estar chiecas y parece estar un poquito gorda,luego la hiciste con mucho busto y sus colmillos muy salidos todo lo demas esta muy MUY bien
sigue asi y llegaras muy muy lejos.

ejejejejejejejejeje my primera critica me siento grande :D :D :D :D
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Jasperideon Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you!!! This is the frist critique written to me!!! I'm so happy! hehe i appreciate you time in giving me a critique!! : D
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fanylahumana Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome
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